Sound: parallel and contrapuntal learner response
1) Type up your feedback from your teacher. Meets the brief impressively, good choice of song and the pace of the editing is perfectly in time with the beat. Both in selection of images and technical construction this is strong. The contrapuntal section is suitably uncomfortable to watch which shows it has impact. Holdding the final image for longer, How deliberate was this? I thought it worked really well. 2) Type up your feedback from fellow students - you can summarise key points if several students give you similar feedback. Feedback from fellow students similarly included the points above and some examples are: -Good use of contrapuntal sound/parallel sound, Good beat drop, some images are on screen for too long. Add less still images. 3) Now reflect on your work and write your own evaluation of your video. Write a 'What went well' (WWW) paragraph and a paragraph for 'Even Better If' (EBI) underneath the rest of your feedback. I believe that my video suited ...