1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. Research 5 TV drama concept 5 Language Terminology and theory 4 Representations 2 Audience and industry 2 Delivery 4 Total 22/30 Strong opening, excellent use of images. Already feels like a wire or top boy style idea, point on montage, POV shots show excellent thoughts behind opening. Some great iconography- pin board is a classic crime drama convention. Really well developed narrative already great detail. Is there too much for 3 minutes though? I also think that if you need all of this perhaps some of this needs to be trailed rather than shown? This feels like a full episode. Superb delivery and use of images in presentation. Whole presentation is narrative but lacks media elements of language representations audience ect. Excellent for crime genre conventions but would like to see some media theorists. Similar to Chicago PD, multi strand...
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Good sound considering it was outside, good prop use however the lighting needs to be better, Confusion between American and British terminology such as use of "Chief" rather than "Captain", Cast of the main character appears too young to be a young adult working as an investigator, Investigators are not normally alone. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. EBI: Improve lighting, Focus on implementing a better cast choice to better represent and create the character in depth and use a higher quality camera and fix the ISO WWW: Good outdoor audio, good acting and good dialogue. 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of i...
1) Choose at least three TV dramas similar to your concept and watch at least one scene from each. Make bullet-point notes on everything you watch, commenting on camerawork, editing, sound and mise-en-scene. Chicago PD, BladeRunner 2049, Nobody Chicago PD analysis: -Mostly POV footage such as bodycamera shots. -Montage scenes, music, contrapuntal audio is used also. Non diegetic and diegetic. BladeRunner 2049 analysis: -Heavy crane shots/drone shots to show the surrounding area -Liminal vibe theme to all the shots, slow pace, slow music Nobody analysis: -Very dark outdoor setting vibe. POV camera shots. Fight scenes. Lack of music but instead a focus on the use of punches. 2) Write a script for your TV drama scene. You'll find guidance for writing a script in the BBC Writers' Room (click on the Script Library to read real examples of professional TV scripts). Lay it out like a real script (see right) - it will add a level of prof...
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