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Prelim feedback

1) Type up your teacher's feedback   in full  plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Good sound considering it was outside, good prop use however the lighting needs to be better, Confusion between American and British terminology such as use of "Chief" rather than "Captain", Cast of the main character appears too young to be a young adult working as an investigator, Investigators are not normally alone. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  three  WWW bullet points and  three  EBI bullet points for your work. EBI: Improve lighting, Focus on implementing a better cast choice to better represent and create the character in depth and use a higher quality camera and fix the ISO WWW: Good outdoor audio, good acting and good dialogue. 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise  statement of intent ? Th

Statement of Intent feedback and learner response

  Title: The vigilante My show will appear on netflix and amazon prime due to the audience that consumes these streaming services and also because the content that appears on these streaming services match the genre conventions that I will be aiming to fulfill in my video production. What will my 3 minute extract feature: In my extract I will focus on creating a narrative which features Mark who has had a traumatic upbringing, this upbringing will be highly intensified through various camera shots which will focus on the traumatic death of his mother when he was younger. This is then what leads him to become a vigilante which focuses on him tracking down criminals in an attempt to see who murdered his mother so that he can finally end up with justice. This will be highlighted through montage scenes of him tracking down criminals followed by various camera angles to show the variety of criminals he has tackled. He will then go about his day tracking criminals as he is waiting for anothe