Prelim feedback
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Good sound considering it was outside, good prop use however the lighting needs to be better, Confusion between American and British terminology such as use of "Chief" rather than "Captain", Cast of the main character appears too young to be a young adult working as an investigator, Investigators are not normally alone. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. EBI: Improve lighting, Focus on implementing a better cast choice to better represent and create the character in depth and use a higher quality camera and fix the ISO WWW: Good outdoor audio, good acting and good dialogue. 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of i...